Group Critiques
Todayyyy, we were put into groups to help shape our stories and maybe take some new ideas. Now, based on what my group discussed about my movie, I think I might either change the way I'm going to portray the "recollection" of memories because it can be seen as a montage and we don't want that.
They liked my idea of Thomas and Brandon, I told them that I didn't want to put in the beginning the idea of Thomas disappearing because I didn't want to bore the audience the rest of the movie.
I'm definitely going to do the shot with the two of them in the kitchen and then a third person coming in to see the perspective of the other person.
Sunday, March 8, 2020
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