Group Critiques

Todayyyy, we were put into groups to help shape our stories and maybe take some new ideas. Now, based on what my group discussed about my movie, I think I might either change the way I'm going to portray the "recollection" of memories because it can be seen as a montage and we don't want that. 
They liked my idea of Thomas and Brandon, I told them that I didn't want to put in the beginning the idea of Thomas disappearing because I didn't want to bore the audience the rest of the movie. 
I'm definitely going to do the shot with the two of them in the kitchen and then a third person coming in to see the perspective of the other person.